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I asked the grass,'Why are you so green?'
I asked the birds,'Why do you sing?'
I asked the trees,'Why sway in the breeze?'
I would ask him, if he loved me.

I asked the ground,'Why tremble and quake?'
I asked the walls,'Why don't you break?'
I asked the iron,'Why do you rust?'
I could have asked him, is it me he trusts?

I asked the tables,'Why don't you just give way?'
I asked the wind from the fan,'Why not go out and play?'
I asked the clock,'Just stop ticking?'
I should have asked him what was he thinking.

I asked the bed,'Why don't you find some comfort?'
I asked the cabinet,'Why hold the shirts?'
I asked the picture frames,'Do you have your own memories?'
I wanted to ask him, if ours was a happy story.

I would want his love, and also his trust.
I want to know if, like iron, our friendship would rust.
All my curiosity, and all I want to know,
All leads back to him, as I love him so.
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Not really sure if its under the right collumn =\
But anyway, my first poem submitted on this site.
But definitely not my first poem.

You can check out my poems on LoveLandia account.
Or my blog, but you'll have to surf alot.. So nevermind.

Hopefully this poem gets seen by people. And if you DO see it, kindly comment, yah? <3

Okay then, I shall try to upload more of my poems in DAYS to come..

HARPEH CAI-KNEES BEEW JEAR!~ And God bless (:

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I love it... It flows so well. I would love to see more of your writing.
And welcome to Deviant art!^^
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nice, simple structure :)

a little essay like,
but that certainly doesn't take away from the poem
[it just appeals to my academic side ;) ]

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